Stars like rain…Roads like fences

Stars like rain
Roads like fences
makes no sense
Since roads lead
yet these seem to hem
lengthen and strengthen
the distance between
Stars like rain
Road like fences
Maybe it’s me
I think

17 Comments on “Stars like rain…Roads like fences

  1. I do like the lines:
    Roads like fences
    makes no sense
    Since roads lead
    That is a whimsical touch for mysteries that both enchant and puzzle us at the same time 🙂

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    • Oh yes and the distance yet the coming together of hearts in a like hearted connection. I like to call them heart connections. Life is wonderfully simple that way I think 🙂 Thank you David

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  2. That’s a very sharp and certain poem. Like you aimed your thoughts and fired them into an abyss, whereat it bounced and returns with poetic jewellery with a yet simpistic flair.

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    • Wow thank you Watt. I actually created the art first and then wrote after. I was thinking how I wished all the rain falling was stars.
      I really like your comment like a boomerang. 🙂

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